Order ID | 4010239628 |
Subject | University writing course |
Topic | Final portfolio A2 |
Type | Revision |
Writer level | University |
Style | Other |
Sources / references | 0 |
Language | English(U.S.) |
Description / paper instructions
This is the instruction for the final portfolio (revision essay). You should revise my editorial essay to improve the grade for at least one full letter grade with all these useful feedbacks (B- to A-). Please read it carefully and follow the instruction of guidelines for final portfolio revision, and see my instructor’s comments and follow all her suggestions for revision all in the editorial final file. This final project is very very important and please write what the instructor wants to see, I will be greatly appreciated and tip you a lot if you really put efforts to write this revision to an A- range essay. Other than revising the writing assignment #2, you should write the description of changes as marginal notes to illustrate why you do these changes (only major changes needed to be mentioned). This file "guidelines for final portfolio revisions" also includes a sample gradeA description of changes, so follow the sample.
Final Portfolio Revisions
Due Friday, April 26 OR Wednesday, May 1 (by midnight) on Blackboard[1]
“Re-vision—the act of looking back, of seeing with fresh eyes, of entering an old text from a new critical direction…” – Adrienne Rich
Focus The Nobel Laureate William Faulkner died still contemplating how he might revise his critically and commercially acclaimed novel The Sound and the Fury. He described the book as the one “that [he] anguished the most over, that [he] worked the hardest at” and also called it his “most splendid failure.” This example, as extreme as it surely is, indicates a kind of writerly ethos that I would like you to inhabit for this upcoming revision assignment. Try to mull over in your mind the idea that writing can always be improved, that it is not ultimately about a grade or about approval from others but about achieving a kind of integrity to the argument and to the prose that is matched in spirit by the integrity of the author and their desire to become better at the craft of writing. This assignment will give you the opportunity to fully invest in the revision stage of the writing process by asking you to start from what were once final drafts. It will ask you to not only make revisions but to keep track of your changes and encourage you to take ownership of your work and justify the writing choices you’ve made. Task
Choose two of your previous assignments and revise them: To demonstrate your revision skills, you’ll need to select two that allow room for improvement. A1, A2 and A3 are all eligible for the final portfolio, but use caution if choosing A3. (Because you only just finished writing A3, you may not yet have enough critical distance to approach it with fresh eyes. Note, also, that I won’t have time to give you margin notes on A3, so you’ll have to make do with just my end comments.) If you originally got an A- on an assignment, but you still want to revise it for the final portfolio, please be aware that all features of the text, including the language, will be held to the highest standard. (And, no, you will not have to re-do any companion essays or ancillary materials for this assignment.) Type two separate “Description of Changes” documents, one for each revised piece: Along with the final copy of each revision, please include a document that describes and justifies the major changes you made. What did you change and why? Make sure you explain where the revision came from—whether it was self-motivated or inspired by a comment from a peer or from me. If you decide not to make a significant revision that I suggested in my comments on the original draft, that’s fine; note what you didn’t change and explain why. When describing minor sentence-level changes involving grammar or style, just summarize them briefly. Keep in mind that revision does not simply entail making surface changes or merely implementing the changes that I suggested. Revisions should be dramatic and self-motivated. This is your opportunity to put your rhetorical judgment to work in deciding what are the best ways of improving your paper, be it advice from a peer, from your professor or from your own inner editor. Grading Rubric: (worth 30%)
A The revision demonstrates excellent rhetorical judgment and application of feedback. B The revision demonstrates above average rhetorical judgment and application of feedback. C The revision demonstrates average rhetorical judgment and application of feedback. D The revision demonstrates below average rhetorical judgment and application of feedback. F The revision demonstrates poor rhetorical judgment and application of feedback.
SAMPLE DESCRIPTION OF CHANGES[2] Page 1: N/A Page 2
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[1] If you choose to turn in your A4 on April 26, your final portfolio revisions will be due on May 1. (Or if you choose to turn in your final portfolio on April 26, your A4 will be due on May 1.) [2] Description of Changes borrowed from Professor Yance Wyatt’s Portfolio Revision activity |